| Name | Vote | Page | Subclause | Line | Comment | Must be Satisfied | Proposed Change |
| Karocki, Piotr | Approve | 14 | 4.3.a.4 | 23 | “such method as BDS/GPS”. Why Chinese and American are somewhat preferred? Why not Galileo or Glonass or IRNSS? | No | Maybe “GPS/IRNSS” would be better choice, as an example of regional (IRNSS) and of global (GPS) systems? |
| Murthy, Rajesh | Abstain | 22 | 6 | 27 | So what are the security and privacy requirements? | No | Please list them |
| Murthy, Rajesh | Abstain | 14 | 27 | The mandatory parts of the standard have references to other IEEE standards. It appears that the standard requires that the systems shall use a standard (may not be IEEE given the for example) to deliver on video formats, transmissions, etc. | No | Update normative references to identify which ones are truly needed to satisfy the requirements | |
| ZHAO, Chunhao | Approve | 16 | 4.4 | 1 | Different system composition forms are actually related to different deployment scenarios. And in real collaboration cases in Digital Retina Systems there might be other scenarios in addition to the three kinds of scnarios listed in the draft (end-edge-cloud, end-edge, end-cloud), e.g. end-end in digital home scenario, edge-edge in smart transportation scenario, cloud-cloud in city brain scenario. | No | Suggest to replace ‘System form‘ with ‘System deployment scenario’ and add other scenarios. |
| Randy | Reject | I apologize as I missed the closing date, but would vote No as privacy is essentially unaddressed, despite the opportunity to use IEEE and/or ISO/IEC standards as informative or normative references. IMO, this is very serious oversight. There are also a number of terms used that are not defined, “privacy” being one example. “Edge” or edge subsystem is appeared to be used broadly, such that it includes any compute system as “local area” is ambiguous. Clause 5.1, the term “it” should be removed (e.g., lines 7-15); same comment in 5.2 and 5.3. Clause 6, what is meant by, “take active steps ……” as compliance with this Clause may be unrealizable. |
